https://lineofsight.pages.dev/
Homepage: ✅** Remove the period on **‘find your focus’
✅ ****Shorten the first headline to: **“Line of sight is a vision care company changing perceptions of what eyecare can be.”
✅ ****Revise second headline to say **‘experience full spectrum eyecare’
✅ ****Make sure the phrase ‘full spectrum eyecare’ is bolded.
**✅ Add the sentence “Text us at (646) 791-6467 to schedule a visit or ask any questions.” to the bottom of the page (where the design has been updated.)
Services page: **✅ ****Change the headline ‘full spectrum vision care’ to ‘**A vision of modern healing’
✅** Correct spelling of ‘professional services’ (professional is currently spelled ‘professionnal’)
✅ Add the sentence “Text us at (646) 791-6467 to schedule a visit or ask any questions.” to the bottom of the page (where the design has been updated.)
Team page: ✅ Change the current headline ‘team’ to ‘meet our team’ **
✅ Instead of ‘Clear Vision’. “Eye Treatments” *Attain long term relief and ocular longevity with preventative and regenerative therapies. ***BUTTON COPY: Optimize your eyes
✅ Instead of ‘Ocular Aesthetics’.. *“Skin Rejuvenation” Signature eye and facial treatment that enhance both vision and aesthetic appearance. ***BUTTON COPY: See and be seen
✅ Instead of ‘who we are’. “Our Identity**”** Our core mission is to integrate hospitality and wellness into healthcare, ensuring you see well and are seen at your best, with our experts.
✅ Instead of ‘why choose us’.. “Difference In Experience*”** From eyewear to clinical care, regenerative eye health to wellness, our experts provide an experience tailored to you, every step of the way.*
